This is a series of short stories the students had to write.
Lesson one was to think of a topic and write the first paragraph of the story. The story is then handed to another student to write another short paragraph and so on until every story has about 5 or 6 authors.
Lesson two was finishing off the shared writing and then the original authors write an ending to the story but they must pull all the different threads together into a proper story.
Lesson three was finishing the ending and writing a neat copy ready for grammar checks.
Lesson four was grammar checks and submitting their work.
The class is a grade 8(M2) Thai class (M2) using English as a Foreing Language. The grammar checks did not change the story and only occasionally was a word changed when the English was muddled.
Most of the grammar changes were articles "s" and some tense agreement.
The planning for this unit can be found here.
Link to Planning
Lesson one was to think of a topic and write the first paragraph of the story. The story is then handed to another student to write another short paragraph and so on until every story has about 5 or 6 authors.
Lesson two was finishing off the shared writing and then the original authors write an ending to the story but they must pull all the different threads together into a proper story.
Lesson three was finishing the ending and writing a neat copy ready for grammar checks.
Lesson four was grammar checks and submitting their work.
The class is a grade 8(M2) Thai class (M2) using English as a Foreing Language. The grammar checks did not change the story and only occasionally was a word changed when the English was muddled.
Most of the grammar changes were articles "s" and some tense agreement.
The planning for this unit can be found here.
Link to Planning
Interesting Dream
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One day, Jimmy slept and dreamt. He got into his book and he didn’t know where he was. He yelled loudly and loudly and loudly no people could hear him. He saw colorful lights in front him. He wanted to know where the colorful lights came from.
He walked into the forest and he found a magic key. He got it. In front of him is a pyramid, he walked into the pyramid. He found someone. It looked like a human. But it was not a human, it is a mummy and the mummy wanted to kill him. He run and run, but the mummy caught up so he fought with mummy. The mummy killed him and now he is a mummy too. He is very happy when he is a mummy. He loves being a mummy. Then he woke up. He is very sad because he wanted to be a mummy.
Finally, Jimmy follows his dream. So he leaves home and went to Egypt. And applied for a job. His job is being a mummy. He was very happy to do this job. He thinks, one day he going to be a mummy. And live in the Pyramid everyday.
Kitiya Trakunphraingam m.2/2 no.2 ( Ice )
Geo
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Once upon a time there was a big man. His name was ‘‘Geo’’. He was a big and old man. One day Geo ate an apple and 1 ours later he had a stomachache and then he got a big abdomen. And ‘‘Big Big Big’‘and then it exploded like a bomb. He does not get help from people but he was a good man he had a lot of friend and he called his friends to help and one of his friends name was‘‘Dedo’’.Dedo came to help him. Geo said ’‘Thank you my friend see you later’’. Geo became a small man but he did not like being a small man. 1 week later Geo wants to go on an adventure and he had many friends to go with him. The apple that he ate he took to the bin. Being a small man he now thinks is good because he is handsome and happy with his life.
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By waii M.2/1#3
Party Empty
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Today I will have a Party, I went to 7 eleven, to buy Fruit, Food, and Candy, but Fruit, Food ..... it does not have. I have candy and Pepsi, so I go to my home to leave Pepsi and Candy, and I go to the Supermarket to buy Fruit, Food, and Vegetables But the supermarket has been closed. So I don’t have Fruit and Food to eat. I don’t know what I should do. Then I go to my friend’s home and eat dinner with my friend and come back home. My home is seized by the bank. I don’t have money because my money is lost. I walked on by I don’t forget. I keep going until I’m stopped at the bridge. Tonight I must be sleep under the bridge with bagger. When I go to my home my money is lost I have a headache I found it everywhere I go to, I cry and cry. One day I walk to find my money. I saw gold in the park and then I steal that gold to buy some food. I have money to buy food but I meet the police man, He think I am a robber. I go to Police station. I am very sad and cry.
The End
By Miw
Mud-Cha
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Mud-Cha There is an employee in a haunted house. She is Mud-cha. She died because of a broken-heart. She killed herself by tying a tie around her neck in this haunted house. Her boss knew about her. He concealed this a knowledge and opened this haunted but many people died when they went to this house but nobody knows about it. The haunted house was open 3 years and has about 50 people, The boss knew this and eventually closed this haunted house but all the people that died wanted revenge on the boss. People who came in to the haunted house was dead in 3 days. And it did not have any people for 10 years. One day one man come in this home. He say “Anybody here?” He searches in there He found a lot of gold. Just a few minute, He here something “Boom!!”He runs away from the haunted house. But Mud-Cha doesn’t allow him to go out. She creates a mirage of a beautiful woman and walked to him and said “Hey, You don’t scare I will help you” “Ok!!Thanks” He said, Mud-Cha climbed to the roof with him. Finally They can go out and she married him. ”Lisa!! Get up” Her mom called her.”You should take a bath” When Lisa got up. She knew Mud-cha is dream.
The End
Nattaya Ittisan (Tonnam) M.1/2 No.4
Kingdom of Knight.
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“Kingdom of Knight” There is one boy in the cabin. His name is Alan. Alan has a dream. In his dream, he see his cabin and It has a giant. A giant kills his family. He runs into the forest. He sees the red rock. He grabs it and hits the giant and he wakes up. He tells his mother about his dream. Next day. He wakes up and sees a giant around his cabin. The dream is true!! In his house his mother says “It has a gun and a flashlight. The flashlight will shine on the giant's body, it will burn and the gun is to shoot the giant, one shot will kill one Giant”. Alan grabs the gun and flashlight and goes to fight the Giants. He wins and he is very tired. He becomes unconscious. His fame spreads and he is very popular.
Five days ago, he became the king of kings. He married the princes and he has a baby. The babies name is Aragones. He is the better man. He is brave. He is the future of the kingdom. One day. He goes into the forest he hears a growl!!. He rides a horse and He meet a dragon. It can talk. He is friendly with the dragon. He can ride it. The dragon flies very high. He finds the kingdom of giants. The giants shoots arrows at him. He's very angry. He orders the dragon to destroy the kingdom. From that time on, The giants are gone from this world!
The End.. by Tee
“Return the Phantoms’ Throne”.
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In the phantom land. There are two phantom groups. One group is the good phantoms and another group is the bad phantoms. The bad phantoms try to snatch the throne from the good phantoms in the war. The good phantoms made a big army. The phantoms fought hard but the bad phantoms are the winners in the war. So, the good phantoms retreated to their protected dimension and stood firm to fight again later. The next time the Phantoms fought, the good phantoms won, and the bad phantoms died. So,The throne returned to them again.
On that time, the various phantoms in phantom land have lots of happiness. They celebrate their grand victory with a specially arranged victory night in phantom land. Some of them eat cakes, candies and mummy snacks. Some of them like to drink apple juices and sodas. Every spirit is very happy and enjoys that day. ...
The End
By. Prakaymuk Pholwong M.1/2 No.8
Jerry's Life.
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My name is Jerry. I work hard in my class. I enjoy my holidays and make it special. That day will be the time for relaxing after studying hard . I then go to the moon. I use my car to drive to the moon. The moon was a long days ride. Jerry wants to create rocket!!! Her goal is she wants to see an extraterrestrial. But mom says to Jerry it is impossible to go to the moon. Jerry cried because she thinks she can go to the moon. Jerry then persuaded her boyfriend to go to the moon. When we stay at the moon. Jerry love love love boyfriend. She then marries her boyfriend.
T H E E N D
Mulan Sekporn Suphanthanapong
Beautiful World.
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There is a prince in the castle.
A Bad Dragon around the castle.
A Magical Princess ^_^
And a tricky witch in a haunted house.
One day, the Princess hears the voice of the Prince. The Princess wants to help the Prince but Princess must go through the scary forest to help the Prince. When the Princess goes to the scary forest the Princess found a bad dragon that she must fight! She starts by casting a spell to make the dragon sleep. But the Witch is the boss of the Dragon. The Witch helped the dragon. Lastly, She starts to cast a spell stronger until the dragon will die. Finally, the Dragon dies. After the Princess wins the fight. Everyone praises the Princess and she wants to marry the Prince. The Princess has a daughter Her name is Lisa. One day, The witch stole her daughter. They go to help her daughter, but it’s too late. The Prince and Princess are very sad.
A Bad Dragon around the castle.
A Magical Princess ^_^
And a tricky witch in a haunted house.
One day, the Princess hears the voice of the Prince. The Princess wants to help the Prince but Princess must go through the scary forest to help the Prince. When the Princess goes to the scary forest the Princess found a bad dragon that she must fight! She starts by casting a spell to make the dragon sleep. But the Witch is the boss of the Dragon. The Witch helped the dragon. Lastly, She starts to cast a spell stronger until the dragon will die. Finally, the Dragon dies. After the Princess wins the fight. Everyone praises the Princess and she wants to marry the Prince. The Princess has a daughter Her name is Lisa. One day, The witch stole her daughter. They go to help her daughter, but it’s too late. The Prince and Princess are very sad.
By FIFA
m.2/2 no.15
Room mate.
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We are friends in the room. In the room has M.1/1. We live together to do everything. We have never argue. One day. We have a trip. Belle want to go to the beach but Namkhing want to go to the mountain. We can’t decide. Then, Belle and Namkhing have argue. When their’s teacher know. She cam to our room. she suggest to go two place. Suddenly, WE can decide. We will go two places. We are happy.
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Bam Assawapisanboon No.15
The Witch.
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I am a witch. I can create everything. I can fly by broom. When I want to travel around I can go by my broom. When I hate someone I can make them die. One day I am playing with my broom in the yard. I saw one bird fly in the sky. I followed that bird and then I find the castle. I like this castle and I fly around. But when I fly my broom stopped working and I fell down on the forest. I walked around to find people. After a long time I see people I need their help but they do not hear me. I tried to get help. “help me help me help me” I said. But people don’t hear me. I walk around and yell. I try to repair my broom but it failed. Finally I die in the forest.
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06 Thanaporn Ploy Jaroensuk
Special Game Time
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One day I played game and I got in to the game. Then I fought with the dragon and the bad man. I want to win but I didn’t have any weapons, I think I will win because my goodness never died. Next I tell my friend to help me and we won. But the game had a new dragon it wanted to kill me. I was very scared. Then my friend helped me so the dragon died. After that I came out of the game and my mother asked What do you want to be in the future? I replied to my mother 'I want to be a producer of games. I like games because they are exciting and have many challenges. Then I searched for a method to create a game and I created a scary game. The game was about zombies that live in town. Many zombies are smart and the zombies are very hungry. When I had free time I created my game. Finally I have a special chance to be a game producer in America and I made a new game called Street Zap. I think it will be popular in all countries in the future.
THE END...
09 Pavarisa Pom Srisatayasatien
The Dragon Castle.
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Once upon a time in winter I was a princes I was trapped in the castle in the space. I missed my home I wanted to get out, I lived in here for 10 years. The castle had many dragons in it. I was very scared. I waited for a period when many dragons slept but many dragons didn’t sleep. One day a witch went to the castle and gave sleeping pills to the princes. The Princes gave the sleeping pill to the dragon success! the dragon slept. The Prince rushed to the rescue and the princess saw the prince. They leave from the castle and went to the princess’s house. The Princess ran to her mother and younger brother. Everyone cried because they were glad that the princess came back. But then the dragon woke up again and it was very angry and it came to the princess again and took the princess to its castle but on the way the prince jumped out of mountain and killed the dragon.
THE END...
11 Phuripa Pha Jarutirasarn.
An Ugly Girl
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In the Magic world, There was a little girl who lived at her home alone because her parents died a long time ago. She doesn’t have friends. She socializes poorly. She tries to be friendly to everyone. She has an ugly face but she is kind. She loves animals and flowers. When she has free time she always reads a comic book and sings a song. When she feels alone then she looks for someone that can be friendly to her. At one time she walks in to the forest and she saw a tiger. She is scared but tiger says I’m not a tiger. I am a human, I have lived as a tiger for a long time. They talk about many stories. Finally they are friends. She likes her friend because he has the same tastes. When sunsets the girl says goodbye and goes back home. ! On Valentine’s day she see a boy who is very handsome. She falls in love with him. She thinks in her mind “I’m an ugly girl”. Then the Angel looked at her. The Angel wanted to help her so gave her a medicine to eat to make her beautiful. The Angel put medicine in the glass of water. She does’nt know that she drank the water. ! In a few minutes she is a very beautiful girl. She looks in a mirror. She thinks It is amazing. This evening she went for a walk and met the boy who is handsome and sitting by himself at the park. He falls in love with her. After many years both of them decide to marry. Afterward they are happy. She drinks water but in a bottle of water there is a poison which is not harmful but It made her ugly again. She become ugly again. ! One day she met the angel “Why are you ugly ?” The Angel asked. “I drank water but it was made of poison that made me ugly again” She said. “Do you want to be beautiful again ?” Angel said. “No, I don’t want” She replies. “Oh! You are a good person you don’t care for your face I like you very much” Angel said and gave a medicine to her again. Then she ate that medicine and finally she was very beautiful and happy forever. ..
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14 Autchariya Fah Khumjaung.
An ugly princess.
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Once upon a time there was an ugly princess. She wanted to be married to a very handsome prince. One day she went to the witch’s hut. “ Help me I want to be a very beautiful princess” said the princess. The witch said “ I will help you but you have to get me a lot of money”. 2 days later the princess gave a lot of money to the witch and the witch made the princess more beautiful. When the prince see the princess he fall in love with the princes. Last, the prince got married to the princess. They lived happily ever after.
05 Panisara Pam Srisatayasatien
The lion in love.
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Once upon a time there was a lion king of the jungle. He fell down in love with the beautiful lioness then he stole a glance at her everyday. The beautiful lioness was afraid of the king lion and she told her father. Her father made a plan for his daughter then told his beautiful daughter lion to cut all of her kings nails. Finally the king lion nails were all. The lion was sent to the hospital. The doctor took care of the lion. The lion fell down in love with the doctor. He decide to tell the doctor. He made a plan. It is a bouquet to give the doctor. The doctor accepted the bouquet from the lion.
The End
06 Poonyanut Belle Tangboriboonsuk
‘Three Little Pigs’.
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Once upon a time, There lived three little pig brothers, All three pigs want to build a house. The youngest pig was done first with building his house, the house was built by straw. Then, the second pig built a house by wood. The youngest pig built a house by brick, it was a strong house. When the night came, the house of youngest pig was done at last. The wolf can see three little pigs, the wolf said “I want to eat them, i’m so very hungry” but three little pigs are very smart them fix it and make a very big gun to kill the wolf. The wolf can see the big gun and say sorry to three little pigs. And the mother pig came today mom said
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08 Ploy Daungneth
The girl.
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At the house there are 2 people. The girl lives with her mother. She is very beautiful and she helps her mom clean the house everyday. Her mother sells clothes. Sometime, the girl helps her mother to sell clothes. One day, Her mother brought her beautiful clothes to sell in another city. Therefore, the girl stayed at her house alone. Her mother and the girl live in Texas. At 21:00 pm. she hears a scary voice. She doesn’t know what it is. She went to find the source of the voice. Suddenly, she found the voice. It is a ghost voice. She peeps at it. She is scared. She ran to her room. And called for help on the phone. Hello! Can you help me ? she said. Why are you avoiding me? This ghost asked. She ran out to the hole near her house. It’s dark and wet. She’s dirty and she smells bad. It’s has a lot of monsters . She is very scared. She found a sword. She grabbed it and fought! . She ran out of the hole. She found a new world. It has a lot of flowers. She is very stunned. She picks some flowers but she doesn’t understand why she lives here. Suddenly, she sees the witch. The witch walks to her and the witch puts a spell on her. She changes to a flower. The end :D
10 Pornpitcha May Laotaweerungruengld!
Pop.
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One day there was a girl whose name is Betty. Betty had a dog and its name is Pop. Betty loved Pop very much. Betty fed Pop every day and played with Pop every day. Betty cared for Pop very much. One day Pop died Betty was sad and cried. After Pop died Betty went to Pop’s grave every Monday. She had flowers to give Pop every every Monday when she often thought of playing with Pop. She lives in Betty’s mind all time. Betty living in her house in London always. remembers Pop. Betty wants to have a new dog but it cannot be Pop.
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By:Verada Boonseng M.2/1 No.11
The Alien.
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In space there is an Alien named Memo. Memo wants to make a big cat robot. Memo want to damage the school. And the other galaxies because Memo feels like some fun. Memo thinks he wants to go to the Earth to damage the schools in the world. Memo damages everything in the world and then eats the world. Memo brings his big cat robot and goes to O-jo’s planet. O-jo’s is the boss of Memo. O-jo feels satisfied because Memo can damage schools in the world Memo is so happy. He walked around the galaxy. One day Memo met a god who does not like Memo and then the god cursed Memo. Memo become a green frog. Memo is terrible. After that he is a good frog. He meets a beautiful queen. He likes her very much. He went to meet god. God knows Memo has become a good frog. God changed him to be a handsome man. The Queen saw him and loved him. One month later they get married The end
01 Kanokporn Mint Nontdecha